We like the writing becase it is WOW!
Alicia - you have given your dragon a great personality! Fancy him liking football! Great writing for 5SC!
Aedan also has a dragon that likes football. He is called Van Persie. Do you think there might be a football team just for dragons?
WOW!that was amazing and fasnating.You put lots of very good work in your writing and lots of good words and you have rely thort about it.