Monday, April 30, 2012

Olivia's dragon writing


My Dragon she is fierce.  Her home is in the Forbidin City.  Her name is Fiona.  Everyone obeys her. And she loves her dog.

5 comments:

  1. Hello Olivia! Did you name your dragon after the character in Shrek I wonder?! This is a super set of sentences and I hope you are proud of the work you have done. See you again on 5SC!

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  2. It is good and it is wow! wow!

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  3. At first your dragon sounded quite scary but if she loves her dog, she must be nice! Does your dragon obey you?

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  4. That is amazing and fablios and you put lots of hard work!

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  5. WOW!That is amazing and you have really put hard work in to that and I loved it.

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