Monday, April 30, 2012

My Dragon by Jacques

I have a pet Dragon.  It is calld exploding bottle becus when it spits fier it macs a big expshen. The teeth are as sharp as the moast shapest thing in the world.  He lives in the  ruins because he leks the ruins.  It is full of sharpnes.


  1. Jacques - this is a great piece of writing! I love the way you have carried your ideas about sharp things through your writing. Well done and please take part in the 5SC again!

  2. Kaya says: You are using good words like ruins. Also the name is funny! Evie says well done for using a simile.