Monday, April 30, 2012

My Dragon by Jacques


I have a pet Dragon.  It is calld exploding bottle becus when it spits fier it macs a big expshen. The teeth are as sharp as the moast shapest thing in the world.  He lives in the  ruins because he leks the ruins.  It is full of sharpnes.

3 comments:

  1. Jacques - this is a great piece of writing! I love the way you have carried your ideas about sharp things through your writing. Well done and please take part in the 5SC again!

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  2. Kaya says: You are using good words like ruins. Also the name is funny! Evie says well done for using a simile.

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