Monday, April 30, 2012

Dragons by Mimi


Dragons are the most powerful and fire-breathing creatures that are the rarest in the world.  Some build their nests with glittering and shining jewlery.  They can rescue people in remote places.  For some enermy they shoot larva or snow crystals.  In fire emergensies or in emergensies they’re alwise here to help.

4 comments:

  1. Eyup. They are as endangered as white tigers and blue whales and pink river dolphins. They could turn invisible sometimes only for a few seconds... What's your favorite breed of dragon? Mine are Swedish Shortsnouts. :)

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  2. You have written some excellent sentences here Mimi! I like the way you have made your dragons friendly and helpful to people. Thank you for writing on the 5SC!

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  3. Hello Mimi. We loved your writing and we thought it was fantastic. We think that if dragons were alive it would be a good thing because we could help them. We like your dragon's nest and the words that you used.

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  4. I like the idea that dragons are always there when you need help in an emergency! Their nests sound beautiful.

    Miss Ramaker

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