Monday, April 30, 2012

Maria's dragon writing

I’m a which and my name is called Ana and I’ve got a baby pet dragon and shes called Lauren.  I live in a catsle and the catsle is called Labroratory that means theres lot of glasses with potioncred, blue, pink, orange and green.  So Ana picks the blue and pink potion and it that the little spider is going to be her servant.  Then the day the spider sais “Why did you said yesterday that I am going to be a servant?”  “Well because you’ve been noty to my bay pet” said the Which.  But then she went furious and she didn’t wait more so she transform her into a servant!

4 comments:

  1. That was fantactic Maria.I liked the bit when you said the which calld the babby drogon Lauen because my sisster is calld Lauren.

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  2. Hello Maria! This is such a great story about Ana and the dragon. You have got lots of colours in your writing and your sentences are really long. Very well done!

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  3. I love it my little Maria....the witch is called like me!!! ;-)

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  4. Well done. Evie thinks your explanation is good. Kyla wants to know how many languages you speak. Charlotte thinks the name of your castle is funny!

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